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    Written A Few Months Back..

    jnugget May 14, 2013

    1. jnugget

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      Despair
      walking through the streets
      i came to a tall building
      looking up to see how high
      a thought came to mind

      i went inside
      but as i climbed the stairs
      tears began to flow
      why? i dont know

      i got to the roof
      walking to the edge
      i begin to shake
      now im leaning over the edge

      looking down to the street
      people walking by
      do they even know im up here
      would anyone care

      thinking long and hard
      about an hour has passed
      my friends and family
      would they notice if i jumped

      something holding me back
      something i dont know
      a voice calling to me
      telling me to step away

      who could it be
      maybe i will find out
      but right now i step away
      to continue this painfull life
       
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      Wow, I love this one, it's such a strong and heavy poem.
       
    3. jnugget

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      Thanks, thought i deleted it but found it somewhere on my hard drive :D
       
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      That is a really meaning full poem :) do you remember how you felt when you was writing this Jay?
       
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      Yes, he has such a way with words no?
       
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      i cant remember sorry
       
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      Not a problem :) it really is a good poem and really well written with alot of meaning :)
       
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      i think i did it last summer
       
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      Yes, I can feel your chagrin and your despair in it, but a wee overboard.
       
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      overboard or not it was how i felt at the time
       
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      Best writers I have always found write from the heart and write about how they feel. It's also a good way to get things off your chest, writing about how you feel can sometimes help you feel a little better.
       
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      writing normally helps but that day was a hard one and it didn't help much believe it or not